Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-
review-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-genart-lc-melnikov-2012-03-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 00)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-03-13
Requested 2012-03-01
Authors Eric Burger
Draft last updated 2012-03-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Alexey Melnikov
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Julien Laganier
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-genart-lc-melnikov-2012-03-13
Review completed: 2012-03-13

Review
review-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-genart-lc-melnikov-2012-03-13

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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-03-07	
IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-15

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:


   | 433   | Unsupported   | the request contains  | RFC6231           |
   |       | collect and   | <collect> and         |                   |
   |       | record        | <record> elements and |                   |
   |       | capability    | the MS does support   |                   |

"does support" --> "does not support" ?

   |       |               | these operations      |                   |
   |       |               | simultaneously        |                   |