Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10
review-ietf-mile-rolie-10-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2017-11-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mile-rolie |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-10-24 | |
| Requested | 2017-09-25 | |
| Authors | John P. Field , Stephen A. Banghart , David Waltermire | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-11-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -10
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Martin Thomson (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-mile-rolie-10-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2017-11-03
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| Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2017-11-03 |
review-ietf-mile-rolie-10-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2017-11-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2017-10-13 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-13 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 13], "handling of collections ealier "--->"handling of collections earlier " -Please spell out IRI (Internationalized Resource Identifiers) at first use Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com