Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mile-template-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 05)|
|Type||Last Call Review|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
Genart Telechat review of - by Peter Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of - by Samuel Weiler (diff)
|Draft last updated||2012-05-27|
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mile-template-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 26-May-2012 IETF LC End Date: 28-May-2012 IESG Telechat date: 07-June-2012 Summary: This draft gives guidance on creating extensions to IODEF (RFC 5070). The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 1) There are two occurrences of the statement "Note that this list is present as of publication time". It might be clearer to use the word "current" in place of "present". 2) Section A.3, insert "section" after "This" in the third sentence. 3) Section A.8, drop "section" in the second sentence. 4) Regarding the example in Appendix B, RFC 6116 uses the e164.arpa domain, not e164.int. You'll probably want to switch to the former.