Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10
review-ietf-mls-architecture-10-secdir-lc-nir-2023-01-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2023-01-16
Requested 2022-12-19
Authors Benjamin Beurdouche , Eric Rescorla , Emad Omara , Srinivas Inguva , Alan Duric
I-D last updated 2023-01-15
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -13 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Early review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Early review of -09 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -10 by David C Lawrence (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Yoav Nir
Artart Last Call review of -15 by Valery Smyslov
Assignment Reviewer Yoav Nir
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mls-architecture by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/OogmjlYmirV68qJoBJ8cxD_n5ko
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 15)
Result Has nits
Completed 2023-01-15
review-ietf-mls-architecture-10-secdir-lc-nir-2023-01-15-00
I have previously done an early review of version -09 of this draft.

At the time I was impressed by the breadth and depth of the security
considerations but found a few nits.

In version -10, the breadth and depth are still there with that section taking
no fewer than 18 pages in the text version. Unfortunately, the nits are also
still present.