Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-10
review-ietf-mls-architecture-10-secdir-lc-nir-2023-01-15-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mls-architecture |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2023-01-16 | |
Requested | 2022-12-19 | |
Authors | Benjamin Beurdouche , Eric Rescorla , Emad Omara , Srinivas Inguva , Alan Duric | |
Draft last updated | 2023-01-15 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Early review of -09
by Yoav Nir
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Genart Early review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Opsdir Early review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff) Artart Early review of -09 by Valery Smyslov (diff) Artart Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Yoav Nir Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Tatuya Jinmei |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Yoav Nir |
State | Completed | |
Review |
review-ietf-mls-architecture-10-secdir-lc-nir-2023-01-15
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Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/OogmjlYmirV68qJoBJ8cxD_n5ko | |
Reviewed revision | 10 | |
Result | Has Nits | |
Completed | 2023-01-15 |
review-ietf-mls-architecture-10-secdir-lc-nir-2023-01-15-00
I have previously done an early review of version -09 of this draft. At the time I was impressed by the breadth and depth of the security considerations but found a few nits. In version -10, the breadth and depth are still there with that section taking no fewer than 18 pages in the text version. Unfortunately, the nits are also still present.