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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture-15
review-ietf-mls-architecture-15-artart-lc-smyslov-2024-08-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mls-architecture
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-08-27
Requested 2024-08-13
Authors Benjamin Beurdouche , Eric Rescorla , Emad Omara , Srinivas Inguva , Alan Duric
I-D last updated 2024-08-19
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -13 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Genart Early review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -09 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Early review of -09 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Yoav Nir (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -10 by David C Lawrence (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Yoav Nir
Artart Last Call review of -15 by Valery Smyslov
Assignment Reviewer Valery Smyslov
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mls-architecture by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/UgFxcRr0L1nOnua_COGE2fZjTFg
Reviewed revision 15
Result Ready
Completed 2024-08-19
review-ietf-mls-architecture-15-artart-lc-smyslov-2024-08-19-00
I am the assigned ART directorate reviewer for this document. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the ART area directors.  Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

I previously reviewed the -09, -10 and -13 versions of the draft and now reviewed the diff
between the -13 and the -15 versions. The added text about the ability to reinitialize 
the group changing the protocol version and/or ciphersuite addresses my concerns.

The issue of inability for a client to remove itself from the group by its own 
seems unsolvable in the MLS architecture. While I think this issue is important, 
I'd leave it on ADs' discretion.