Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27
review-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2017-07-27-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 32) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-08-15 | |
| Requested | 2017-07-25 | |
| Authors | Christer Holmberg , Roman Shpount | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-07-27 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -22
by Paul Kyzivat
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Secdir Last Call review of -22 by Rich Salz (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -22 by Carlos Pignataro (diff) Genart Last Call review of -26 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Genart Telechat review of -27 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -28 by Rich Salz (diff) Genart Telechat review of -28 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Paul Kyzivat |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 27 (document currently at 32) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2017-07-27 |
review-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2017-07-27-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2017-07-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. (These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing these during my Last Call review.) Issues: Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 (1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but no explicit reference was found in the text This is now redundant because all the references in the text have been changed to draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis. (2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4572 This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This draft should now be referencing that.