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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-02-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-02-26
Requested 2016-02-15
Authors Suhas Nandakumar
Draft last updated 2016-02-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam W. Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-02-26
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2016-02-26
review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-02-26-00

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2016-02-22

IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26

IESG Telechat date: NA



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use.

-[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I
suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we
want to convey.

-[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3"



Best regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

Research

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