Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-02-26
Requested 2016-02-15
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2016-02-26
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Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2016-02-26
Review completed: 2016-02-26


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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2016-02-22

IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26

IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.


Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use.

-[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we want to convey.

-[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3"


Best regards,



Meral Shirazipour