Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06
review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-03-18-00

Hello Jari

   The suggested changes were made and reviewed by AD and the chairs

Thanks
Suhas

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> On Mar 17, 2016, at 1:35 AM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net> wrote:
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> Thanks for the review, Meral!!
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> Authors, have you see the suggested editorial changes? Wanted to make sure
they are not missed. > > Jari > >> On 22 Feb 2016, at 20:19, Meral Shirazipour
<meral.shirazipour at ericsson.com> wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART
reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all
IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat
these comments just like any other last call comments. >> >> For more
information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document:
draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05 >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >>
Review Date: 2016-02-22 >> IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26 >> IESG Telechat date:
NA >> >> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC
but I have some comments. >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >>
Nits/editorial comments: >> -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at
first use. >> -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with
audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if
that is what we want to convey. >> -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section
3"---->"in Section 3" >> >> Best regards, >> Meral >> --- >> Meral Shirazipour
>> Ericsson >> Research >> www.ericsson.com >>
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