Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06
review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-03-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-03-15
Requested 2016-03-10
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-03-18
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg13064.html
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2016-03-18
Review completed: 2016-03-18

Review
review-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2016-03-18

Hello Jari

   The suggested changes were made and reviewed by AD and the chairs

Thanks
Suhas

Sent from my iPhone

> On Mar 17, 2016, at 1:35 AM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko at piuha.net> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the review, Meral!!
> 
> Authors, have you see the suggested editorial changes? Wanted to make sure they are not missed.
> 
> Jari
> 
>> On 22 Feb 2016, at 20:19, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour at ericsson.com> wrote:
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>> 
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-proto-iana-registration-05
>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>> Review Date: 2016-02-22
>> IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-26
>> IESG Telechat date: NA
>> 
>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.
>> 
>> Major issues:
>> 
>> Minor issues:
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> -[Page 2,3], please spell out RTP, SDP, AVPF at first use.
>> -[Page 2] "simulation data" is listed as real time along with audio, video. I suggest removing it and putting "time critical application" if that is what we want to convey.
>> -[Page 5], Section 5, "in the Section 3"---->"in Section 3"
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> Meral
>> ---
>> Meral Shirazipour
>> Ericsson
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