Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
review-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-04-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 37)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-04-12
Requested 2019-03-22
Draft last updated 2019-04-07
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -36 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -34 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -34 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -35 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Zitao Wang
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-04-07
Reviewed rev. 34 (document currently at 37)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2019-04-07

Review
review-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-04-07

Summary:    This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP).  SDP is  intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of session announcement, session invitation, and other forms of multimedia session initiation.  This document obsoletes RFC 4566.
I think the document make sense and is written very clear, except some small nits:
# In Section 5, there are several terms that miss references, such as "US-ASCII subset of UTF-8",  "ASN.1 or XDR", etc.
# s/session- specific/session-specific/
# Suggest to add tags on "overview optional items" to identified now-obsolete items, such as "a=cat", "a=keywds", "k=".