Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
review-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-04-07-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 37) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2019-04-12 | |
| Requested | 2019-03-22 | |
| Authors | Ali C. Begen , Paul Kyzivat , Colin Perkins , Mark J. Handley | |
| I-D last updated | 2019-04-07 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -36
by Catherine Meadows
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Genart Last Call review of -34 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -34 by Zitao Wang (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -35 by Zitao Wang (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Zitao Wang |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 34 (document currently at 37) | |
| Result | Has issues | |
| Completed | 2019-04-07 |
review-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34-opsdir-lc-wang-2019-04-07-00
Summary: This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP). SDP is intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of session announcement, session invitation, and other forms of multimedia session initiation. This document obsoletes RFC 4566. I think the document make sense and is written very clear, except some small nits: # In Section 5, there are several terms that miss references, such as "US-ASCII subset of UTF-8", "ASN.1 or XDR", etc. # s/session- specific/session-specific/ # Suggest to add tags on "overview optional items" to identified now-obsolete items, such as "a=cat", "a=keywds", "k=".