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Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-08-09
Requested 2021-07-19
Authors Christer Holmberg , Harald T. Alvestrand , Cullen Fluffy Jennings
I-D last updated 2021-08-09
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Derrell Piper (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Ines Robles (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -04 by Claudio Allocchio (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-08-09
IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document defines a new Session Description Protocol (SDP) Grouping
Framework extension called 'BUNDLE'.

The document obsoletes RFC8843 (published  on Jan 2021) by removing the
inconsistency between RFC 8843 and RFC8829.  - The procedures regarding
assigning the port value to a bundled "m=" section in an answer and instead use
the same port for all bundled "m=" sections; some (initial or subsequent) and a
subsequent offer were inconsistent. This specification removes the
inconsistency by aligning the port value assignment procedure with the
procedure in RFC 8829.-

This specification updates also RFCs 3264, 5888, and 7941.

Major issues:  Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments: Not found

Thanks for this document,

Ines