Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-02-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 54)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-14
Requested 2018-01-31
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -48 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -49 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-02-15
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/y8gkZXK_BPG_Mc28ytJMxp2ISp0
Reviewed rev. 48 (document currently at 54)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-02-15
Review completed: 2018-02-15

Review
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-02-15

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-48

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-?
IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-14

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: None


Nits/editorial comments:

      Typo: Abstract 3rd paragraph: "RTP header extension that van..."
      Do you mean "RTP header extension that can..."?

Linda Dunbar