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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06-genart-telechat-even-2013-07-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-06-25
Requested 2013-06-20
Authors Miguel Angel García , Simo Veikkolainen , Robert Gilman
I-D last updated 2013-07-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-07-01
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06-genart-telechat-even-2013-07-01-00

Hi Simo,

This will be OK

Roni



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 RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05



Would adding a statement like this at the end of 3.1.2 address your concern:

                Exceptions for other network types, such as for  the "ATM"
                network type defined in [RFC3108], require additional
                specifications.

Regards,

Simo



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Hi Simo,

For the PSTN case the document explain how to construct the m-line PSTN is used
based on the ccap using port 9. This is not specified for the ATM case. So if
it is not mentioned it should be clear that using  ccap for ATM is not
specified and need another document

Roni



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 RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05



Hello Roni,

Please see my answer below prefixed with [SV].



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 Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05



I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.

Document:

draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–5–29

IETF LC End Date: 2013-6–4

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC.





Major issues:



Minor issues:

1.



I can understand from the draft that when you have IP and PSTN nettype it is
requires that the ccap will be for the PSTN. What happens if you want to have
the ccap nettype as ATM to be used with IP in the c=



[SV] If either endpoint does not support ATM, the “c=” line with the ATM
address would not get used (either it is not offered, or the Answerer removes
that from the SDP configurations). In case both endpoints actually support and
want to use ATM as alternative to IP based bearer, the conventions in RFC3108
would need to be followed when crafting the SDP configurations. That said, I
haven’t taken a detailed look at RFC3108 to see if the ATM based media can be
negotiated using the SDP Capability Negotiation framework and its current
extensions.



Simo



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