Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06-genart-telechat-even-2013-07-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-06-25
Requested 2013-06-20
Authors Miguel García, Simo Veikkolainen, Robert Gilman
Draft last updated 2013-07-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06-genart-telechat-even-2013-07-01
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-07-01

Review
review-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-06-genart-telechat-even-2013-07-01



Hi Simo,

This will be OK

Roni

 

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 04 June, 2013 9:48 AM

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 RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

 

Would adding a statement like this at the end of 3.1.2 address your concern:

                Exceptions for other network types, such as for  the "ATM" network type defined in [RFC3108], require additional specifications.

Regards,

Simo

 

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 RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

 

Hi Simo,

For the PSTN case the document explain how to construct the m-line PSTN is used based on the ccap using port 9. This is not specified for the ATM case. So if it is not mentioned it should be clear that using  ccap for ATM is not specified and need another document

Roni

 

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 RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

 

Hello Roni,

Please see my answer below prefixed with [SV].

 

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Subject:

 Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: 

draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-miscellaneous-caps-05

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–5–29

IETF LC End Date: 2013-6–4

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

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I can understand from the draft that when you have IP and PSTN nettype it is requires that the ccap will be for the PSTN. What happens if you want to have the ccap nettype as ATM to be used with IP in the c=

 

[SV] If either endpoint does not support ATM, the “c=” line with the ATM address would not get used (either it is not offered, or the Answerer removes that from the SDP configurations). In case both endpoints actually support and want to use ATM as alternative to IP based bearer, the conventions in RFC3108 would need to be followed when crafting the SDP configurations. That said, I haven’t taken a detailed look at RFC3108 to see if the ATM based media can be negotiated using the SDP Capability Negotiation framework and its current extensions.

 

Simo

 

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