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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-03
review-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-03-secdir-lc-emery-2016-09-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-08-26
Requested 2016-08-19
Authors Nobo Akiya , George Swallow , Carlos Pignataro , Andrew G. Malis , Sam Aldrin
I-D last updated 2016-09-01
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shawn M Emery
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 05)
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-09-01
review-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-03-secdir-lc-emery-2016-09-01-00











I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft specifies multipath support in environments where Entropy Labels
(ELs) are used so that Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping and Traceroute
operations are possible.

The security considerations section does exist and refers to the security
considerations in base specifications for applicability.  The sections
continues that there are no new security considerations with
this specification.  I agree with this assertion.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/initiator to not be able to/initiator that is unable to/

"LSPs stitched together": not for sure what "stitched" means and wasn't
defined in the Terminology section.

Shawn.
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