Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group-05
review-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group-05-genart-lc-halpern-2014-04-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-05-06
Requested 2014-04-24
Authors Eric Osborne
I-D last updated 2014-04-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2014-04-24
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-extended-admin-group-05
    Extended Administrative Groups in MPLS-TE
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 24-April-2014
IETF LC End Date: 06-May-2014
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standards RFC

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:


    I believe that the description of when to use this EAG is slightly 


misleading.  The text says that EAG is to be used "when a node wishes to 


advertise more than 32 colors for a link."  I believe it is more 


accurate to say that it is to be used "when a node wishes to advertise 


colors for a link which are not represented in the first 32 bits of the 


color mask."  The node may only wish to advertise colors 7 and 60, but 


that will require the EAG.




Nits/editorial comments: N/A