Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04
review-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04-genart-lc-even-2014-03-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-01-16
Requested 2014-01-02
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Secdir Early review of -03 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04-genart-lc-even-2014-03-22
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09556.html
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2014-03-22
Review completed: 2014-03-22

Review
review-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04-genart-lc-even-2014-03-22

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Document:  

draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014–1-12

IETF LC End Date: 2014–1-16

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC

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Nits/editorial comments

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The abstract section can be expanded with text from the first paragraph of the introduction providing more information about usage

2.

       

The congestion section may need some text on UDP congestion support, maybe reference RFC4505 but I am also OK with most of the current text.