Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod-09
review-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod-09-secdir-telechat-kent-2013-08-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-08-13
Requested 2013-07-25
Draft last updated 2013-08-07
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Stephen Kent
Assignment Reviewer Stephen Kent
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod-09-secdir-telechat-kent-2013-08-07
Reviewed rev. 09
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-08-07

Review
review-ietf-mpls-ldp-dod-09-secdir-telechat-kent-2013-08-07



I re-reviewed this
      document

 as part of the security
        directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being
        processed by the IESG.

  





        I compared the -08 and -09 version of this document, using the
        IETF diff tool.





        The authors responded to my concern that there were many
        instances of what appeared to be normative text in Sections 3
        and 4, 

yet almost all instances of the words
        “must” and “should” were lowercase. They removed all of the
        words in question. I'm surprised by this outcome, but if the WG
        chairs and ADs believe the resulting text is correct, with NO
        normative terms, so be it.





      The authors also revised the Security Considerations (Section 7)
      text, addressing all of my comments.