Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-lag-multipath-05

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-lag-multipath
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2018-12-11
Requested 2018-11-27
Authors Nobo Akiya, George Swallow, Stephane Litkowski, Bruno Decraene, John Drake, Mach Chen
Draft last updated 2018-12-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -03 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joerg Ott
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-lag-multipath-05-tsvart-lc-ott-2018-12-11
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-12-11


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I have reviewed draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-lag-multipath-05.  It defines a set of
TLVs to extend the MPLS LSP Ping request and response packets to support
debugging L2 multipath connectivity.  Looking at the fact that this document
only defines additional fields for extending an existing mechanism, there are
no direct transport issues.  However, some may arise in conjunction with the
base documents this one is extending.  I am careful here as I have not followed
the MPLS work and reading up on all the documents would not been possible.
Therefore, I am phrasing my observations as observations and questions:

1. With the potentially substantial stacking of TLVs, I am wondering how large
   packets can get, especially if numerous links might constitute a LAG and all
   of those are extensively described.  It may be useful to provide the reader 
   with some intuition.   There are many useful examples in the document, but
   they all refer to individual fields.  A complete packet could be helpful.

2. I assume the MPLS LSP Ping mechanism specifies a packet pacing
   rules. Would those need refinement for multipath probing as all echo
   request packets may traverse a common path as a burst on their way
   to a load balancing router.  The same would hold for returning the

Irrespective of this transport review, the beginning of section 2 points to
RFC 8029 section 3.3, which is a pointer to a deprecated Annex. Even if just
informal, the reader should probably not be expected to know the details
of deprecated technologies.

p9, 2nd para "A LAG member may also..." should probably be MAY.
p11, section 5, 1st line: "to constructs" -> "to construct"
p13, 1st line: additional logics -> additional logic