Early Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04-rtgdir-early-bocci-2021-06-22-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2021-06-22 | |
| Requested | 2021-06-07 | |
| Requested by | Martin Vigoureux | |
| Authors | Nagendra Kumar Nainar , Carlos Pignataro , Mustapha Aissaoui | |
| Draft last updated | 2021-06-22 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -04
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Matthew Bocci
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Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Tero Kivinen |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Matthew Bocci |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04-rtgdir-early-bocci-2021-06-22
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/G8VKcTRajUzfPTx8aIWzr8zpfW8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2021-06-22 |
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04-rtgdir-early-bocci-2021-06-22-00
I have been selected as the RTG DIR reviewer for draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint. Thanks for the draft. This is clear and well written. I have just a couple of minor editorial nits, below, that should be fixed prior to publication. Regards Matthew Abstract: s/Segment SUb-TLV/Segment Sub-TLV 1. Introduction s/"Protocol in the Segment IS Sub-TLV"/"Protocol in the Segment ID Sub-TLV"