Early Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04-rtgdir-early-bocci-2021-06-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2021-06-22
Requested 2021-06-07
Requested by Martin Vigoureux
Authors Nagendra Kumar Nainar , Carlos Pignataro , Mustapha Aissaoui
I-D last updated 2021-06-22
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Matthew Bocci (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Tero Kivinen
Assignment Reviewer Matthew Bocci
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/G8VKcTRajUzfPTx8aIWzr8zpfW8
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Has nits
Completed 2021-06-22
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04-rtgdir-early-bocci-2021-06-22-00
I have been selected as the RTG DIR reviewer for
draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint.

Thanks for the draft. This is clear and well written. I have just a couple of
minor editorial nits, below, that should be fixed prior to publication.

Regards
Matthew

Abstract:
s/Segment SUb-TLV/Segment Sub-TLV

1. Introduction
s/"Protocol in the Segment IS Sub-TLV"/"Protocol in the Segment ID Sub-TLV"