Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-relay-reply-04
review-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-relay-reply-04-secdir-lc-turner-2014-12-18-00

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Version: 06
Summary: Ready with some non-security/non-privacy nits.

Ping mechanisms always give me the heebie-jeebies [1]
because of the security concerns associated with them (i.e., DoS, 
spoofing/hijacking/etc., and unauthorized disclosure).  This document
specifies an extension to the existing ECHO mechanism in RFC 4379
and it does nothing to address these concerns in fact it increases the
concerns wrt DoS. *BUT* it rightly points this increase exposure out in
the security considerations section.  It provides remediation techniques
similar to those specified in RFC 4379: rate limit and validate source
against access list.  This draft, unlike RFC 4379, does recommend that
operators wishing to not disclose their nodes blank the address out in
the TLV.  This draft also refers to RFC 4379 for additional security
considerations.

WARNING - questions and nits follow:

s3 - 1st paragraph: Relayed Echo Reply “replaces” Echo Reply - does this
mean you’re deprecating the use of “Echo Reply”?

s4.1: Is the outermost label allowed to be set to 255 to support the
“ping” mode or must it always be set to 1, 2, etc. to support “traceroute"
mode - as described in RFC 4379 s4.3?   I know s5 is just an example
but it really looks like this extension is just supposed to be for fault
isolation.

s4.1 - last paragraph: Does the next initiator put it’s address in the stack
before or after the previous initiator?  I assume it’s after, but I maybe
missed that part?  Would be good to state that explicitly.

Cheers,
spt

[1] 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heebie-jeebies_

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