Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-10
Requested 2013-11-27
Authors Lizhong Jin , Frederic JOUNAY , IJsbrand Wijnands , Nicolai Leymann
I-D last updated 2013-12-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
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Document:

draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-hsmp-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–12-8

IETF LC End Date: 2013-12–10

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an standard track RFC

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Major issues:



Minor issues:



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In section 3.1 last paragraph

“

If the peer has not advertised the corresponding capability, then label
messages using the HSMP FEC Element SHOULD NOT be sent to the  peer

. “. Why use a SHOULD NOT and not MUSR NOT







Nits/editorial comments:

In section 2 for PTP IEEE1588 need a reference. There is a reference in the
reference section but it is not used. Also the tictoc reference is not used.