Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-11-08 | |
| Requested | 2012-10-25 | |
| Authors | IJsbrand Wijnands , Toerless Eckert , Nicolai Leymann , Maria Napierala | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-11-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
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Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Catherine Meadows (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08
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| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2012-11-08 |
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08-00
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-07.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2012/11/13 IESG Telechat date: 2012/11/15 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but there are some minor comments that you may wish to address. * Minor The draft has the pre-5378 boilerplate but it is unclear to me why. I went through the older versions to find draft-wijnands but that was submitted first in 2009. Is this really necessary? * Typos Section 1.2 s/indentifying/identifying/ Section 2 s/particlar/particular/ Section 2.3 s/speccial/special/ s/nessesary/necessary/ Section 6 s/Adrial Farrel/Adrian Farrel/ Thanks Suresh