Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-11-08
Requested 2012-10-25
Authors IJsbrand Wijnands, Toerless Eckert, Nicolai Leymann, Maria Napierala
Draft last updated 2012-11-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-11-08

Review
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-11-08

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see


http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html

).

Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-signaling-07.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2012/11/13
IESG Telechat date: 2012/11/15

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but
there are some minor comments that you may wish to address.

* Minor

The draft has the pre-5378 boilerplate but it is unclear to me why. I
went through the older versions to find draft-wijnands but that was
submitted first in 2009. Is this really necessary?

* Typos

Section 1.2

s/indentifying/identifying/

Section 2

s/particlar/particular/

Section 2.3

s/speccial/special/
s/nessesary/necessary/

Section 6
s/Adrial Farrel/Adrian Farrel/

Thanks
Suresh