Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02-secdir-lc-gudmundsson-2014-10-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2014-10-27
Requested 2014-10-16
Authors IJsbrand Wijnands , Eric C. Rosen , Arkadiy Gulko , Uwe Joorde , Jeff Tantsura
I-D last updated 2014-10-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Ólafur Guðmundsson (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Lizhong Jin (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ólafur Guðmundsson
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-10-30
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02-secdir-lc-gudmundsson-2014-10-30-00

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

The document is well written and clear in its descriptions. I have no comments
on its contents other that it was easy to follow.

The security section is quite brief and inherits its considerations by
reference. As one of the references inherits its security considerations also
by reference to the base specification I find it odd that base spec (RFC5036)
is not referenced.

        Olafur