Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02-secdir-lc-gudmundsson-2014-10-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2014-10-27
Requested 2014-10-16
Authors IJsbrand Wijnands, Eric Rosen, Arkadiy Gulko, Uwe Joorde, Jeff Tantsura
Draft last updated 2014-10-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Ólafur Guðmundsson (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Lizhong Jin (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ólafur Guðmundsson
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02-secdir-lc-gudmundsson-2014-10-30
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-10-30

Review
review-ietf-mpls-mldp-in-band-wildcard-encoding-02-secdir-lc-gudmundsson-2014-10-30

	

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. 
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

The document is well written and clear in its descriptions. I have no comments on its contents other that it was easy to follow. 

The security section is quite brief and inherits its considerations by reference. 
As one of the references inherits its security considerations also by reference to the base specification I find it odd that 
base spec (RFC5036) is not referenced. 

	Olafur