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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk-12
review-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk-12-genart-lc-korhonen-2024-11-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-11-11
Requested 2024-10-21
Authors Loa Andersson , Stewart Bryant , Matthew Bocci , Tony Li
I-D last updated 2024-11-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Toerless Eckert (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Catherine Meadows (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -12 by Joerg Ott (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/orKWggHZLS4IHzUUTtbFs3qH2ow
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-11-11
review-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk-12-genart-lc-korhonen-2024-11-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-mna-fwk-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2024-11-11
IETF LC End Date: 2024-11-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is ready and I do not have any major issues with it. It was
even readable for someone not too familiar with MNA before starting to read the
document (and the associated requirements RFC).

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: What I would like to see as a non-MNA person are few
illustrations of label stack how different elaborated aproaches would look
like. Those would make the document a lot more readable/informational.