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IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-nrp-selector-03
review-ietf-mpls-mna-nrp-selector-03-rtgdir-lc-hares-2026-04-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-mna-nrp-selector
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2026-02-11
Requested 2026-01-21
Requested by Jim Guichard
Authors Tony Li , Vishnu Pavan Beeram , John Drake , Tarek Saad , Israel Meilik
I-D last updated 2026-05-05 (Latest revision 2026-05-05)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Shawn M Emery (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -03 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Xiao Min (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -04 by Jen Linkova (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-mna-nrp-selector by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/tkGFQ4N4AWB9bLcUGXm6vK6iJw8
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 06)
Result Has nits
Completed 2026-04-06
review-ietf-mpls-mna-nrp-selector-03-rtgdir-lc-hares-2026-04-06-00
Status: ready with NITS
Summary: Nicely written, the comment on the IANA format is NITS, but it needs to be fixed. 


Cheerily, Sue Hares


1. IANA NITS
IANA require the form "Registry" in "Group". 

In section 4.1, the text does not specify the group of registries that 
MPLS actionm Parameters regsitry belongs to. 

Old text:
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA1) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 13-bit
   NRP Selector Action./

In Section 4.2, the text does not specify the group of registries for 
the MPLS Network Actions Parameters/Network Action Opcodes registry./ 

Old text:/ 
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA2) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 20-bit
   NRP Selector Action. /

In section 4.3, similarly, the group of registries that 
"MPLS Network Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry 
is from is missing. 

old text:/
   This document requests that IANA allocate a codepoint (TBA3) from the
   "Multiprotocol Label Switching Architecture (MPLS)"/"MPLS Network
   Actions Parameters"/"Network Action Opcodes" registry for the 20-bit
   Entropy and NRP Selector Action./  

The