Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02
review-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02-genart-lc-carpenter-2017-07-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-07-12 | |
| Requested | 2017-06-28 | |
| Authors | Eric C. Rosen | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-07-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -01
by
Jonathan Hardwick
(diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -02 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Genart Last Call review of -02 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02-genart-lc-carpenter-2017-07-06
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| Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2017-07-06 |
review-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02-genart-lc-carpenter-2017-07-06-00
Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2017-07-07 IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-12 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03 Summary: Ready -------- Comment: -------- This is a very clear document, even for somebody quite ignorant of the topic. Nits: ----- > This document also removes the unimplemented > "Advertising Multiple Routes to a Destination" feature,... I think it would be helpful if this said explicitly "as specified in section 4 of RFC3107". (Not a big deal, unless you have to edit the text for some other reason.) --