Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02
review-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02-genart-lc-carpenter-2017-07-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-07-12
Requested 2017-06-28
Authors Eric C. Rosen
I-D last updated 2017-07-06
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -02 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-07-06
review-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02-genart-lc-carpenter-2017-07-06-00
Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02

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Document:  draft-ietf-mpls-rfc3107bis-02.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-12
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-03

Summary: Ready
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Comment: 
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This is a very clear document, even for somebody quite
ignorant of the topic.

Nits:
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> This document also removes the unimplemented
> "Advertising Multiple Routes to a Destination" feature,...

I think it would be helpful if this said explicitly "as
specified in section 4 of RFC3107". (Not a big deal, unless
you have to edit the text for some other reason.)

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