Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-01-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-01-26
Requested 2021-01-12
Authors Stewart Bryant, George Swallow, Mach Chen, Giuseppe Fioccola, Greg Mirsky
Draft last updated 2021-01-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Andy Smith (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Elwyn Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Mirja K├╝hlewind (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-01-29
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/GxSQRK7PFi9MumkIlx08EM5fRZ8
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2021-01-29

Review
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-01-29

Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document describes an method of making a Packet Loss and Delay Measurement (defined in RFC6374) on flows carried over an MPLS Label Switched path, including multi-point to point LSPs.  This document is clear and well written. It is READY for publication.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng