Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-01-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-01-26
Requested 2021-01-12
Authors Stewart Bryant , George Swallow , Mach Chen , Giuseppe Fioccola , Greg Mirsky
I-D last updated 2021-01-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Andy Smith (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Mirja Kühlewind (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/GxSQRK7PFi9MumkIlx08EM5fRZ8
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-01-29
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sfl-08-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-01-29-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document describes an method of making a Packet Loss and
Delay Measurement (defined in RFC6374) on flows carried over an MPLS Label
Switched path, including multi-point to point LSPs.  This document is clear and
well written. It is READY for publication.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng