Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11-genart-lc-even-2024-09-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-09-06
Requested 2024-08-23
Authors Rakesh Gandhi , Clarence Filsfils , Daniel Voyer , Stefano Salsano , Mach Chen
I-D last updated 2024-09-01
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -11 by Marcus Ihlar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Ned Smith (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -13 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -14 by Marcus Ihlar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/4E802yr4GoW6vpMbokFCvy6LPuY
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-09-01
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11-genart-lc-even-2024-09-01-00
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-09-01
IETF LC End Date: 2024-09-06
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready to be published as a standard track rFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
In section 4.2.2 first paragraph “ the response messages are preferred to be
sent back in-band on the same link ”  do you mean “the response messages SHOULD
be sent …”