Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11-secdir-lc-smith-2024-09-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2024-09-06
Requested 2024-08-23
Requested by Jim Guichard
Authors Rakesh Gandhi , Clarence Filsfils , Daniel Voyer , Stefano Salsano , Mach Chen
I-D last updated 2024-09-27
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -08 by Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -11 by Marcus Ihlar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Ned Smith (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Roni Even (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -13 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -13 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -14 by Marcus Ihlar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ned Smith
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/1SvH9UHVUkjLXhtvbzGAyCIcqI8
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-09-20
review-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-11-secdir-lc-smith-2024-09-27-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.
The summary of the review is: Ready

Note: Line 7 of the first paragraph of the Introduction may have a
singular/plural agreement mismatch. “ are used to steer traffic through a
specific, user-defined paths”

R/through a specific,/through specific,