Early Review of draft-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast-15
review-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast-15-rtgdir-early-venaas-2015-02-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2015-02-03
Requested 2015-01-26
Draft last updated 2015-02-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Vijay Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -15 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stig Venaas
State Completed
Review review-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast-15-rtgdir-early-venaas-2015-02-03
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 17)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2015-02-03

Review
review-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast-15-rtgdir-early-venaas-2015-02-03

Hi



I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. 


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Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it 


would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF 


Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through 


discussion or by updating the draft.




Document: draft-ietf-mpls-seamless-mcast-15
Reviewer: Stig Venaas
Review Date: 2 February 2015
IETF LC End Date: 2 February 2015
Intended Status: Proposed Standard

Summary:
The document is fairly well written. I only found minor editorial
issues, plus potentially a missing IANA action.

The document states in e.g.
6.2.2. Leaf A-D Route for Global Table Multicast
that the RD in the MCAST-VPN NLRI is set to all 1s for (*,G)-state.
Is this use of RD defined in another document? Shouldn't RD type
65535 then be assigned for this purpose in


http://www.iana.org/assignments/route-distinguisher-types/route-distinguisher-types.xhtml



Minor issues:

Section 3:
The reader is suppose to be familiar with MVPN procedures and
              ^^^^^^^^

although this by no means imply that this alternative
                          ^^^^^^

5.1.2. Routes re-avertise by PE or ASBR
              ^^^^^^^^^^^
5.2.2. Routes re-avertise by PE or ASBR
              ^^^^^^^^^^^

Stig