Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06
review-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-06-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-06-23 | |
| Requested | 2014-06-09 | |
| Authors | Yaacov Weingarten , Sam Aldrin , Ping Pan , Jeong-dong Ryoo , Greg Mirsky | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-06-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Christopher Inacio (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2014-06-23 |
review-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-06-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-06-23 IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-23 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 8], Section 4.1 "the commitment of the shared resources are be coordinated"--missing 'to'-->"the commitment of the shared resources are to be coordinated" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com