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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-inter-domain-oam-14
review-ietf-mpls-spring-inter-domain-oam-14-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2024-05-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-spring-inter-domain-oam
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2024-05-17
Requested 2024-05-03
Authors Shraddha Hegde , Kapil Arora , Mukul Srivastava , Samson Ninan , Nagendra Kumar Nainar
I-D last updated 2024-05-18
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -16 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Chris M. Lonvick (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -13 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Qin Wu (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -17 by Qin Wu
Tsvart Last Call review of -14 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Michael Richardson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Tüxen
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-spring-inter-domain-oam by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
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Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-05-18
review-ietf-mpls-spring-inter-domain-oam-14-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2024-05-18-00
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If I understand things correctly, an LSP ping packet is a UDP/IPv4 or
UDP/IPv6 packet and the processing described in this document can increase
the size of such a packet. I am wondering how IP level fragmentation is
avoided, in case the packet gets larger than the MTU.

Nit:
Section 3:
Reply Path (RP) TLv -> Reply Path (RP) TLV