Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02
review-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02-rtgdir-lc-white-2017-01-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2017-01-24
Requested 2017-01-09
Requested by Xian Zhang
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Christian Huitema (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Russ White
Review review-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02-rtgdir-lc-white-2017-01-23
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/rtg-dir/current/msg03285.html
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-01-23
Review closed: 2017-01-23

Review
review-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02-rtgdir-lc-white-2017-01-23

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Subject: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02.txt
From: "Russ White" <russ at riw.us>
Date: Mon, 23 Jan 2017 16:34:44 -0500
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Y'all--

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir. Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-aps-updates-02.txt 
Reviewer: Russ White
Review Date: 23 January 2017
IETF LC End Date: ??
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

The quality and readability of this document is excellent; the draft explains what it needs to explain clearly and in precise terms (given the reader has read the correct background documents).

Major Issues: No major issues found.

Minor Issues: No minor issues found.

Sincerely --
Russ