Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map-08
review-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map-08-secdir-lc-roca-2013-09-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2013-09-10 | |
Requested | 2013-08-02 | |
Authors | Adrian Farrel , Hideki Endo , Rolf Winter , Yoshinori Koike , Manuel Paul | |
I-D last updated | 2013-09-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Early review of -08
by Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Brian E. Carpenter Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Vincent Roca (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Vincent Roca |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2013-09-12 |
review-ietf-mpls-tp-mip-mep-map-08-secdir-lc-roca-2013-09-12-00
Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. -- This document refers to [RFC6371] and [RFC6941] for detailed security discussions. I have no problem with that. However I have two comments: 1/ It says: "Implementations therefore are required to offer security mechanisms for OAM. Deployments are strongly advised to use such mechanisms." These sentences do not use the RFC2119 key words. Is that deliberate? 2/ I really have problems understanding the following claim: "Mixing of per-node and per-interface OAM on a single node is not advised as OAM message leakage could be the result." Can you be more explicit in the I-D? It's important since it's probably not discussed in [RFC6371] and [RFC6941]. Minor comments: ** MEP is used without being defined. Cheers, Vincent