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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02
review-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02-opsdir-lc-tsou-2014-03-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-03-25
Requested 2014-02-14
Authors Jeong-dong Ryoo , Eric Gray , Huub van Helvoort , Alessandro D'Alessandro , Taesik Cheung , Eric Osborne
I-D last updated 2014-03-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 04)
Result Has nits
Completed 2014-03-28
review-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02-opsdir-lc-tsou-2014-03-28-00

Dear all,



I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's

ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational

area directors.



This document describes alternate mechanisms to perform some of the

   functions of MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) linear protection

   defined in RFC 6378, and also defines additional mechanisms.



Summary: Ready with nits



Line 410, delete 1st 'when'



Line 425, replace 'Switch- over' with 'Switch-over'



Line 453, 'is accepted' can be deleted for redundancy



Line 549, replace 'transmission' with 'received' or delete it, otherwise
‘integrity of the packet transmission’ does not parse



Line 575, delete 'under SD condition' as it is redundant



Line 580-583, the phrases:

   "...The packet duplication SHALL continue in the WTR

   state in revertive operation and SHALL stop when the node leaves the

   WTR state.  In non-revertive operation, the packet duplication SHALL

   stop when the SD condition is cleared."

should be rewritten as:

   "When the SD condition is cleared, in revertive operation, the packet
   duplication

SHALL continue in the WTR state and SHALL stop when the node leaves the

    WTR state; while in non-revertive operation, the packet duplication SHALL
    stop immediately."





Thank you,

Tina