Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02
review-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02-opsdir-lc-tsou-2014-03-28-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2014-03-25 | |
Requested | 2014-02-14 | |
Authors | Jeong-dong Ryoo , Eric Gray , Huub van Helvoort , Alessandro D'Alessandro , Taesik Cheung , Eric Osborne | |
I-D last updated | 2014-03-28 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Hilarie Orman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2014-03-28 |
review-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02-opsdir-lc-tsou-2014-03-28-00
Dear all, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors. This document describes alternate mechanisms to perform some of the functions of MPLS Transport Profile (MPLS-TP) linear protection defined in RFC 6378, and also defines additional mechanisms. Summary: Ready with nits Line 410, delete 1st 'when' Line 425, replace 'Switch- over' with 'Switch-over' Line 453, 'is accepted' can be deleted for redundancy Line 549, replace 'transmission' with 'received' or delete it, otherwise ‘integrity of the packet transmission’ does not parse Line 575, delete 'under SD condition' as it is redundant Line 580-583, the phrases: "...The packet duplication SHALL continue in the WTR state in revertive operation and SHALL stop when the node leaves the WTR state. In non-revertive operation, the packet duplication SHALL stop when the SD condition is cleared." should be rewritten as: "When the SD condition is cleared, in revertive operation, the packet duplication SHALL continue in the WTR state and SHALL stop when the node leaves the WTR state; while in non-revertive operation, the packet duplication SHALL stop immediately." Thank you, Tina