Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection-05
review-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection-05-genart-lc-gurbani-2013-04-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-04-18
Requested 2013-04-04
Authors Yaacov Weingarten , Stewart Bryant , Daniele Ceccarelli , Diego Caviglia , Francesco Fondelli , Marco Corsi , Bo Wu , Xuehui Dai
I-D last updated 2013-04-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-ring-protection-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Apr-09-2013
IETF LC End Date: Apr-18-2013
IESG Telechat date: Not known

This document is ready as an Informational.  Some comments for
changes follow.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits: 3

Nits:

- S1.1, bullet numbered 3: s/actionis/action is/
- S2, header "P2P Ring Protection": In the header, "P2P" probably
 refers to "Point-to-Point" and not "Peer-to-Peer".  It is okay
 to leave it as such if you think that the readers in the MPLS
 domain will interpret it as "Point-to-Point", but if you think
 it will help to folks (like me) who do not normally work at the
 network layer then it may be worth expanding the acronym out
 in the header.  (FWIW, I initially assumed "P2P" stood for
 "Peer-to-Peer".)
- S2.1, s/mis-connectivity, should/mis-connectivity should/

Thanks,

- vijay
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