Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mptcp-rfc6824bis-13
review-ietf-mptcp-rfc6824bis-13-opsdir-lc-jiang-2019-04-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-mptcp-rfc6824bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2019-04-26
Requested 2019-04-12
Authors Alan Ford , Costin Raiciu , Mark J. Handley , Olivier Bonaventure , Christoph Paasch
I-D last updated 2019-04-28
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -11 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Ines Robles (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -15 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-mptcp-rfc6824bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 18)
Result Has nits
Completed 2019-04-28
review-ietf-mptcp-rfc6824bis-13-opsdir-lc-jiang-2019-04-28-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard track document presents a set of extensions to traditional TCP to
support multipath operation. This document specifies v1 of Multipath TCP,
obsoleting v0 as specified in RFC6824. This document is clear and well written.
There are a small Nit.

Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Has NITs

Major issue:  not found.

Minor issue:  not found.

Nits: Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 6182.

Regards,

Sheng