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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-

Request Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-03-13
Requested 2012-03-09
Authors Hitoshi Asaeda , Hui Liu , Qin Wu
I-D last updated 2012-03-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
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Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Completed 2012-03-13
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120321
IETF LC End Date: 20120320
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: the wording of the document is too poor and can lead to
confusion. The use of RFC 2119 key words is bad, in particular for MAYs.


Francis.Dupont at

PS: I'll send the full review as soon as I have the time.