Last Call Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 06)|
|Type||Last Call Review|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
Genart Last Call review of - by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of - by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
|Draft last updated||2012-03-13|
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120321 IETF LC End Date: 20120320 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Not Ready Major issues: the wording of the document is too poor and can lead to confusion. The use of RFC 2119 key words is bad, in particular for MAYs. Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr PS: I'll send the full review as soon as I have the time.