Last Call Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-
review-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-genart-lc-dupont-2012-03-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-03-13
Requested 2012-03-09
Draft last updated 2012-03-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Magnus Nystrom
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-genart-lc-dupont-2012-03-13
Review completed: 2012-03-13

Review
review-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-genart-lc-dupont-2012-03-13

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120321
IETF LC End Date: 20120320
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: the wording of the document is too poor and can lead to
confusion. The use of RFC 2119 key words is bad, in particular for MAYs.

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: I'll send the full review as soon as I have the time.