Last Call Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-

Request Review of draft-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2012-03-20
Requested 2012-03-08
Authors Hitoshi Asaeda, Hui Liu, Qin Wu
Draft last updated 2012-04-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Magnus Nystrom
Assignment Reviewer Magnus Nystrom 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-multimob-igmp-mld-tuning-secdir-lc-nystrom-2012-04-03
Review completed: 2012-04-03


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This informational document suggests profiles of the IGMPv3 and the
MLDv2 protocols. In particular, it suggests tuning and optimization
for mobile and wireless networks.
The document does not propose any new functionality and as such, seems
correct in stating that no new security considerations are warranted
beyond those present in the core protocol documents.

My only suggestion is that the document is reviewed by a native
English speaker for grammatical enhancements.

-- Magnus