Last Call Review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-eap-06
review-ietf-nea-pt-eap-06-secdir-lc-johansson-2013-01-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-nea-pt-eap
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2013-01-16
Requested 2013-01-03
Authors Nancy Cam-Winget, Paul Sangster
Draft last updated 2013-01-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -06 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Leif Johansson
State Completed
Review review-ietf-nea-pt-eap-06-secdir-lc-johansson-2013-01-10
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2013-01-10

Review
review-ietf-nea-pt-eap-06-secdir-lc-johansson-2013-01-10

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes a posture transport protocol for EAP tunnel
methods.

I found the document clearly written and easy to follow.

The only suggestion I have is that in section 3.4 (or 4.2.5) on the Asokan
Attack the document should clearly state that the verification of the
channel
token MUST be performed before any other attestations are evaluated.

        Cheers Leif