Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-16
review-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-16-yangdoctors-lc-rahman-2019-01-09-01

YANG Doctor review of draft-ietf-netconf-netconf-event-notifications-16 (by
Reshad Rahman)

No YANG module in this draft but there are numerous examples based on the YANG
modules in draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications and
draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push. Validation of the examples was done with yanglint
0.16.59.

The major issues are related to the examples, although in 2) below  the
root-cause might be with the YANG module in
draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications  and in 3) there is an issue which
has already been reported on draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push:

1) The establish-subscription request in Figure 3 fails yanglint validation,
the "stream" element has to be moved after the "stream-xpath-filter" element,
that fixed the following issue:

err : Invalid order of elements "stream-xpath-filter" and "stream".
(/ietf-subscribed-notifications:establish-subscription/stream-xpath-filter)

2) The establish-subscription error response in Figure 5 fails yanglint
validation, the "id" element is missing. This is because
draft-ietf-netconf-subscribed-notifications has leaf id as mandatory in
establish-subscription output, either we remove the mandatory or we reserve a
value as invalid id or we add a when statement?

err : Missing required element "id" in "establish-subscription".
(/ietf-subscribed-notifications:establish-subscription)

3) The modify-subscription request in Figure 7 fails yanglint validation
because of missing "datastore" element.

err : When condition
"../ietf-subscribed-notifications:target/ietf-yang-push:datastore" not
satisfied.
(/ietf-subscribed-notifications:modify-subscription/ietf-yang-push:periodic)

There are 2 causes here: missing "datastore" element and incorrect when
statements in draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push (as reported by Andy Bierman).
Fixing ietf-yang-push.yang and adding the following before element
"datastore-xpath-filter " fixed the example.
    <yp:datastore
    xmlns:ds="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-datastores">ds:running</yp:datastore>

Minor comments and nits:
- Abstract s/YANG Push/YANG-Push/ since YANG-Push is the term introduced in
draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push

- Introduction. Last sentence doesn't read well, "...a RESTCONF client via a
dynamic subscription..." may need tweaking

- Section 5 s/terminates/terminates,/

- Section 7 3rd bullet. s/this MAY but does not have to be included/this MAY be
included/?

- Section 7 s/kill-subscription-error/delete-subscription-error/ (thanks Rob)

- Figure 3, stream-xpath-filter uses prefix "ds" for example-datastore.yang.
Since "ds" is used by ietf-datastores.yang, might be better to choose another
prefix such as "ex"

Regards,
Reshad.