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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03
review-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03-artart-lc-yao-2023-10-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2023-11-13
Requested 2023-10-23
Authors Sean Turner , Russ Housley
I-D last updated 2023-10-28
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -03 by Jiankang Yao (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jiankang Yao
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13 by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/WRFIXrvZ_vihcsGf7fhne_dqHac
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-10-28
review-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03-artart-lc-yao-2023-10-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2023-10-28
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

This document is clear and in good shape.


BTW,
In section 1,
"
	      |  Implementations that support TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis]
	      |  should refer to TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] in Sections 4
	      |  and 5 of [RFC7589].
"

The "|" looks to be odd to me.

remove "|"?