Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06
review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2018-06-28 | |
| Requested | 2018-06-14 | |
| Authors | Andy Bierman , Martin Björklund , Jürgen Schönwälder , Kent Watsen , Robert Wilton | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-06-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -04
by
Reshad Rahman
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Erik Kline (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Linda Dunbar |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28
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| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2018-06-28 |
review-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-06-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2018-06-28-00
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Has Nits I have been asked to review this document on behalf of the ops directorate. This document describes how to use/place YANG Library used by Network Management Server The document goes on describing a "standard mechanism to expose which YANG Modules are used". Nits: The document didn't say who will be the user. If anyone is interested to know "which YANG Modules are used", this person usually needs to know the details of the YANG Module, not just the Module names specification. He/she may need to get the entire YANG Modules Is YANG Library same as YANG Library Definitions? some sections refer to "The Definitions". Does it mean same as YANG Library? Linda Dunbar