Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11
review-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-11-23-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-11-23 | |
| Requested | 2021-11-09 | |
| Authors | Kent Watsen , Russ Housley , Sean Turner | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-11-23 | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -02
by Joe Clarke
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -12 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/4XKQuQMRJ3xEca_Le-NpYcF-RYI | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 14) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-11-23 |
review-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-11-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-sztp-csr-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2021-11-23 IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-23 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: [Page 3], Section 1.1 "bootstraped"->"bootstrapped"