Early Review of draft-ietf-netconf-yang-notifications-versioning-10
review-ietf-netconf-yang-notifications-versioning-10-opsdir-early-galimberti-2025-12-10-00

Hi,

I have been selected as the Operational Directorate (opsdir) reviewer for this
Internet-Draft.

The Operational Directorate reviews all operational and management-related
Internet-Drafts to ensure alignment with operational best practices and that
adequate operational considerations are covered.

A complete set of _"Guidelines for Considering Operations and Management in
IETF Specifications"_ can be found at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-opsarea-rfc5706bis/.

While these comments are primarily for the Operations and Management Area
Directors (Ops ADs), the authors should consider them alongside other feedback
received.

- Document: [draft-ietf-netconf-yang-notifications-versioning-10]

- Reviewer: [Gabriele Galimberti]

- Review Date: [2025-12-10]

- Intended Status: [Standards Track]

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## Summary

This document is ready for publication, very few modification need
to be addressed prior to to publication.
This document extends the YANG notifications subscription mechanism
to specify the YANG module semantic revision and version at the subscription.
The revision and version and are key information to determine the semantic
of the data when a YANG-Push notification is received, adding this information
to the makes the operation easier and safer.

## General Operational Comments Alignment with RFC 5706bis

I'd like to see more text in section 7 to summarize the different
cases supported by this draft. A simple schema can help to remind
the benefit of the proposed revision and version management.

## Major Issues

 > No major issues found.

## Minor Issues

### Section

7.
It offers therefore a complementary
   information to the solution in this draft by describing how one
   specifi YANG module revision is part of a set of YANG modules.

It offers therefore a complementary
   information to the solution in this draft by describing how one
   specific YANG module revision is part of a set of YANG modules.

8. remember to remove

## Nits

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