Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-
review-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-01-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-01-17 | |
| Requested | 2012-01-06 | |
| Authors | Fuad Abinader , Sri Gundavelli , Kent Leung , Suresh Krishnan , Domagoj Premec | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-01-17 | |
| Completed reviews |
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Christer Holmberg
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
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review-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-01-17
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| Completed | 2012-01-17 |
review-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-01-17-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 16 January 2012 IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012 IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: - The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchors, but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those. Regards, Christer