Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-01-17
Requested 2012-01-06
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Christer Holmberg
Review review-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-genart-lc-holmberg-2012-01-17
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg07070.html
Draft last updated 2012-01-17
Review completed: 2012-01-17

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Document: draft-ietf-netext-bulk-re-registration-09




Reviewer: Christer Holmberg




Review Date: 16 January 2012




IETF LC End Date: 17 January 2012




IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2012




 




Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.




 




Major issues: -




 




Minor issues: -




 




Nits/editorial comments:




 




- The document talks about mobile access gateways and local mobility anchors, but I did not find any references to, and/or definitions of, those.




 




Regards,




 




Christer