Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip-lr-
review-ietf-netext-pmip-lr-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip-lr
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2012-02-28
Requested 2012-02-08
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of - by Mary Barnes (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Carl Wallace
Review review-ietf-netext-pmip-lr-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-03-01
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg03127.html
Draft last updated 2012-03-01
Review completed: 2012-03-01

Review
review-ietf-netext-pmip-lr-secdir-lc-wallace-2012-03-01

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.


This document proposes initiation, utilization and termination mechanisms
for localized routing between mobile access gateways within a proxy mobile
IPv6 domain.  The security considerations section introduces (for this
document) the requirement for IPSec and the reuse of a security
association described in RFC 5213.  This text belongs in the body of the
document in my opinion, with the security considerations possibly changed
to simply reference RFC 4832 and RFC 5213 security considerations.