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Early Review of draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-11
review-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-11-opsdir-early-hares-2014-01-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-01-23
Requested 2013-11-28
Authors Martin Björklund
Draft last updated 2014-01-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -11 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-11-opsdir-early-hares-2014-01-23
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-01-23
review-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-11-opsdir-early-hares-2014-01-23-00
OPS-DIR review: draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg



Status: Ready to go:

Quality: Excellent. I thank the author (M. Bjorklund) for his excellent and
careful work on the draft.



Editorial notes: I assume you have gone through a yang model checker. If not,
please validate the } on 17, 19, and 23 at the end of the containers.



IANA section: Correctly done, but should be check by IANA

Security notes: Well done and carefully thought through.

RFC notes: These are carefully and correctly laid out.



Note to Benoit and Joel: I’m sorry this was delayed until Thursday this week.



Note:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.



These comments  were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other  last call comments.



Sue Hares