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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10
review-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10-genart-lc-joras-2021-07-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-07-02
Requested 2021-06-18
Authors Alexander Clemm , Yingzhen Qu , Jeff Tantsura , Andy Bierman
I-D last updated 2021-07-13
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Reshad Rahman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Matt Joras (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Matt Joras
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/X_GIWKgWwhv1PBzQf2mqos38CQE
Reviewed revision 10 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-07-13
review-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-10-genart-lc-joras-2021-07-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-nmda-diff-??
Reviewer: Matt Joras
Review Date: 2021-07-13
IETF LC End Date: 2021-07-02
IESG Telechat date: 2021-07-15

Nits/editorial comments:

Consider rewording this sentence in performance considerations:

"One possibility for an implementation to mitigate against such a possibility
is to limit the number of requests that is served to a client, or to any number
of clients, in any one time interval, rejecting requests made at a higher
frequency than the implementation can reasonably sustain."

It is excessively wordy and uses the word "possibility" twice. I would suggest
breaking this into two separate sentences.