Telechat Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-17
review-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-17-dnsdir-telechat-obser-2024-11-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2024-12-17
Requested 2024-11-26
Authors Jürgen Schönwälder
I-D last updated 2024-11-27
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -16 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -16 by Giuseppe Fioccola (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -16 by Rifaat Shekh-Yusef (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -16 by Florian Obser (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -16 by Russ Housley (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -16 by Bron Gondwana (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -17 by Florian Obser
Artart Telechat review of -17 by Bron Gondwana
Intdir Telechat review of -17 by Antoine Fressancourt
Assignment Reviewer Florian Obser
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/AxSLPrcNe1N5QDCrHnhnkolJctk
Reviewed revision 17
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2024-11-27
review-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis-17-dnsdir-telechat-obser-2024-11-27-00
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they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs.
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I did a review of -16 and marked it ready.
An informative reference to RFC 9499 - DNS Terminology was added, thanks!

An issue was interoduced in -17:
The pattern for email-address was changed to '.+@.+'.
This was probably done in response to the ARTART review.
I'm not an expert in email addressing, but this seems way too lenient.

I'm marking this as "Ready with issues", noting that I have no idea how to address the issue.